Mardy's response

The blue was hard to read. I think that you could have added some more facts about the latest cell phones. I think that you could do really well on this project if you put the time into it

Danica's Response

Jon- you have all the citations and they are complete. The title of the notes are accurate with the title of the citations. The color of the response is the same color as the 5 paragraph essay. The color of the notes text is the same in both article posts and different from response and 5 paragraph essay font color. The response could have been a little bit clearer, and you should have taken more notes. Not as much information as you could have gotten. I suggest widening your topic area.

Grace's responce to the 2 articals

Hey Jone ,
I found one citation but no the other most likely its there but i couldn't see it . Your color was easy to find and read and the are the same. In of the titles aren't from the article title though so i would fix that. Maybe you should write more about your topic though the stories are short and you response aren't telling me information . I would fix things i said up above , like you topic lot i like the newer phones more .